A full day, one on one, focused on your movie.
This is the deepest work I do with writers. It’s for writers with a new idea who want a whole day to discover it, develop it, and break the story. It’s also for writers who have a script, but feel like they haven’t gotten to the heart and soul of their film yet.
We start with a few quiet minutes, then spend the morning on the foundation of your story: who your characters are, what the story is really about, and why you’re the one to tell it. After lunch, we take a long walk and talk through your movie, building it sequence by sequence. We close by putting it all on the page, so you leave with your story broken and a clear plan for what comes next.
About 5 hours (not including lunch break), one on one, in person in Los Angeles
Morning foundation work, afternoon walk and talk through your story and finish with rewrite plan work.
You keep a journal throughout the day and leave with your story mapped out
For new ideas, works in progress, or drafts that need a fresh look
A full day, one on one, focused on your movie.
This is the deepest work I do with writers. It’s for writers with a new idea who want a whole day to discover it, develop it, and break the story. It’s also for writers who have a script, but feel like they haven’t gotten to the heart and soul of their film yet.
We start with a few quiet minutes, then spend the morning on the foundation of your story: who your characters are, what the story is really about, and why you’re the one to tell it. After lunch, we take a long walk and talk through your movie, building it sequence by sequence. We close by putting it all on the page, so you leave with your story broken and a clear plan for what comes next.
About 5 hours (not including lunch break), one on one, in person in Los Angeles
Morning foundation work, afternoon walk and talk through your story and finish with rewrite plan work.
You keep a journal throughout the day and leave with your story mapped out
For new ideas, works in progress, or drafts that need a fresh look