You finished a draft. Now figure out how to make it better.
I’ll read your full feature or short film script, then we’ll meet to talk it through. You won’t get a pile of written notes. We have a focused conversation about your script and use it to build a clear plan for your rewrite. You leave the session knowing exactly what to do next.
This is for writers with a finished draft, or close to finished, who want an honest read and a clear path forward.
How it works
Tell me about your project. When you sign up, you’ll fill out a short questionnaire about your goals for the script and the top three to five things you’d like help with. That way our time goes to what matters most to you.
I read your script. Send me your draft, and I’ll read the whole thing before we meet.
We talk it through. We start with the big picture: what your story is really about, what’s working, and the biggest things to address. Then we go through the script piece by piece, looking at what each part is doing and what it could do.
You build your rewrite plan. You’ll fill out a rewrite plan worksheet as we talk. It covers your big takeaways for the rewrite and a list of every specific note and idea you want to keep. You leave with your plan in hand, ready to start.
Options
Feature script (up to 120 pages): full read plus a 90-minute session. $550
Short film script (up to 30 pages): full read plus a 60-minute session. $250
Please allow a week for me to read your script. We will iron out timeline over email.
You finished a draft. Now figure out how to make it better.
I’ll read your full feature or short film script, then we’ll meet to talk it through. You won’t get a pile of written notes. We have a focused conversation about your script and use it to build a clear plan for your rewrite. You leave the session knowing exactly what to do next.
This is for writers with a finished draft, or close to finished, who want an honest read and a clear path forward.
How it works
Tell me about your project. When you sign up, you’ll fill out a short questionnaire about your goals for the script and the top three to five things you’d like help with. That way our time goes to what matters most to you.
I read your script. Send me your draft, and I’ll read the whole thing before we meet.
We talk it through. We start with the big picture: what your story is really about, what’s working, and the biggest things to address. Then we go through the script piece by piece, looking at what each part is doing and what it could do.
You build your rewrite plan. You’ll fill out a rewrite plan worksheet as we talk. It covers your big takeaways for the rewrite and a list of every specific note and idea you want to keep. You leave with your plan in hand, ready to start.
Options
Feature script (up to 120 pages): full read plus a 90-minute session. $550
Short film script (up to 30 pages): full read plus a 60-minute session. $250
Please allow a week for me to read your script. We will iron out timeline over email.